Friday, May 23, 2008

Fire At Will (Original Version) Comments

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The questions you ask young lady, young man
of our nation and my generation, is nothing unexpected.
Just like the blood our dead brothers and your forefathers shed;
they have and always will beg to be given answers.
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delilah contrapunctal 23 May 2008

Well-written...with honesty and clarity, Ted.....and as always, plenty of heart...and soul... thankyou... Love, D.

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This piece did not warrant any criticism it received, far from it... but I'm glad you posted the second version anyway, because otherwise I wouldn't have seen either of them. And people should. t x

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Alison Cassidy 23 May 2008

It is the experiencing you relate here - and something those of us who are immune from it can never even begin to understand. But we can watch the documentaries and read words (like these) and get some idea of the 'nightmares of horror' you have suffered. There is dignity in your words and more than a hint of disgust too, methinks. I salute you. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Ted...this my friend, is one stunningly powerful piece of work...and Gospel Truth! You should shoot off copies to Lib-On-The-Hillary Clinton & Let's Have Tea For Two With Terror's Mamma, Obama! This way, they will at least have a better understanding, as to what they will never know anything about! Excellent Work! ~ FjR ~ ..2008..

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Ivan Donn Carswell 23 May 2008

Freedom is another word for nothing left to lose; the pity of it is we take it for granted and prosecute ourselves every time we feel it is under real or imagined threat. Old soldiers are always alert bargains too good to miss! Great missive Sir. Rgds, Ivan

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