Fire Softly Burning. Poem by Scott Gervaise

This is one of those recordings I spoke of in the story part of my poem 'Pucker Wind'. I'm trying to upload the file so you can hear it for yourself. On this occasion I've been battling with trying to keep it lyrically the same as the recording because the words on the recording repeat a bit too much. I'm stuck between the version I have here and the version I have recorded, I like them both but the version printed here I believe tells the story better, although I may end up changing it back to what's on the recording so as to try and gain some kind of credibility for what I'm trying to do. They are both nearly identical.