Fire Within Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Fire Within

Rating: 5.0


Oh, my dear of dearest
I considered you close and nearest?
Will you forget me ever and deceive?
Will your heart not respond to me and receive?

I have surrendered and completely fallen through
It was only to your response “how are you”?
I m carry read hot volcano in burning pot
Will you be positively responding to it or not?

Eyes can’t hide it and tongue can’t speak
I have lost the nerve and become very weak
Slowly I breathe the air and painfully leave
Who to be blame for and made to believe

All images emerge from unknown land
They all suggest as if I were their friend
Why should they come and invade my dream?
I wake up all of sudden and start to scream

Eyes have lost all spark and glitter
Little uneasiness with feeling bitter
Why at all I should bear all pain
Was it attempted from any other gain/

Lips sizzle as rain dazzles
One dries up and other makes wet
It will be felt closely but soon to forget
When will you make it to be known or be let?

I see in it as no victory or defeat
I may retain your name but not delete
Nothing has been made known so far
Why you prefer to remain away and so far




Will it be so memorable when we really unite?
Will it end in reality when nuptials tie?
What are stars doing in the sky with shine?
Will they not be present here to dine?

I dreamt of beautiful night in bed
Lights dimly lit with bulbs blue and red
Will it arouse passion to run very high/
Will it be able to end the season dry?

I wish no clouds to thunder and rain
They must celebrate it without pain
No clash on that day but only lightening
Simple silver linings without frightening

Big and hot furnace may melt the iron
It may turn into liquid and simply flow on
Who knows what shape it may turn into?
True love may surrender in all the process through

I want the whole of galaxy to witness the scene
It might be unique event for them to be seen
Will my love have greatest opportunity to thank?
To all of those who remained with us and sank

Bring us to the land of reality to live together
Facilitate us to make it different altogether
We may prove match to the real friends
Start from the stretch and best to the ends

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Desiree Cash 16 March 2010

Wonderful description, I am very fond of this one. Though it is sad, it is still lovely. (: Thank you for sharing.

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Brenda Arroyo 11 March 2010

It's beautful. sad but lovely. and your rhyme was great!

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Kahara Tessia 03 March 2010

very good gives good images

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*~*happily desturbed*~* ? 28 February 2010

i like it.. :) its very good. keep writing.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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