Holly Somer

Fireworks

Colorful sparks bursts
Traveling across the sky
People look and are amazed
They want more to brighten up the sky
Purple, Blue, Red and Yellow form a cloud
A beautiful cloud that would beat a sunsets beauty anyday

Poem Submitted: Wednesday, July 4, 2007
Poem Edited: Saturday, March 19, 2011

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  • William Jackson (7/4/2007 11:28:00 PM)

    I give you a ten for 'Fireworks'. Well said! Suggestions: Change 'bursts' to burst. Add a comma after burst and add a period after 'sky' in both place. Add a comma after cloud. Change sunsets to sunset's. Add a period at the very end after any day.

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  • ♥ Loved Sunshine Princess♥ (7/4/2007 8:52:00 PM)

    This truely discribes fireworks. Awesome Job Holly! ! ! ! !
    Sun ♥

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