First Poem by Naomi Waters

First

Rating: 4.5


This is an obstacle
Denying me passage
Permission granting me slight leeway
Not enough to really do anything
Im trying to do better
Be better
Its not helping
Im still not going anywhere
I just want one single speck of improvement
Something that now seem impossible to conceive
They tell me to keep trying
My main problem isnt lack of want
I am famished for victory
Sadly I dont think ill ever get there

Tuesday, September 19, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: desire,determination,victory
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 19 September 2017

A refined poetic imagination, Naomi. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Naomi Waters 24 October 2017

I will read your poem and I am so grateful that you even took the time to read my poem and it makes me happier that you actually commented on it.

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