First Hour First Love Poem by Bhargabi Dei Mahakul
First Hour First Love
This is the first hour all feel this,
Precious time is, all do not miss.
Morning has to come near soon,
Nature's lap will have new boon.
Grasses are alert all feel all trees,
Awake oh children! You please.
At first first hour comes first ray,
Full of love sure new bees say.
Father in heaven does a meeting,
Nature mother comes in greeting.
Palm full emotion it leaves a star,
Mist with interest fills ocean in jar.
Full of wisdom entire sky lights,
Broken cloud again love writes.
We feel freshness in eager mind,
Such amazing love does it bind.
Everyday this hour speaks truth,
Youth shines and comes to booth.
Pure love for father goes heaven,
Sun smiles with colours of seven.
© Bhargabi Dei Mahakul,11 August 2015. All rights reserved.
lovely....it flows so well, like this very much. 12 Aug 2015 by laura duran | Reply picture of Laurel Smith xI enjoyed this :) good work 12 Aug 2015 by Laurel Smith | Reply picture of sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ x.........welcome to poetfreak, Bhargabi Dei Mahakul....this is a beautiful poem...my favorite line ★ Sun smiles with colours of seven. 13 Aug 2015 by sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ | Reply picture of Sylvia Frances Chan xWELCOME to our Poetfreak Community, enjoy your time being here and create as many poems as you wish. We are happy that you have chosen PF. Thank you so much. 13 Aug 2015 by Sylvia Frances Chan | Reply picture of Sylvia Frances Chan xI like all stanzas, the flow, the language and the brilliant end rhymes. I adore the title as love is my favourite theme. Thank yiou for sharing your beautiful mind match. 13 Aug 2015 by Sylvia Frances Chan | Reply picture of Angel mia LOVE xWow mesmerizing warm heartfelt ink ty for your wonderful poems blessings darling xoxoxo xoxoxo xoxoxo 13 Aug 2015 by Angel mia LOVE | Reply picture of Candy Barr xYour words flow like the waters! You are a kind person who speaks softly! I know! 14 Aug 2015 by Candy Barr | Reply picture of Ramin Ara xFinely penned, , , Bhargabi, , , Thank you. 14 Aug 2015 by Ramin Ara | Reply picture of Elena S(*_*) xBeautiful poem! Thank you for sharing! Yes indeed there is no other time during the day to feel as much love as when the sun comes up. I have not fully caught many of them but those I've seen out in my bones a drop of ever love. 29 Aug 2015 by Elena S(*_*) | Reply Note: These comments (feedback) are received through poetfreak.
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Freshness! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.