Father Good Morning Poem by Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Nuadihi, Khuntagaon, Bonai, Dist-Sundargarh, Odisha, INDIA

Father Good Morning

Rating: 4.6


With new hope blossoms flower
It spreads fragrances up to tower.
New smile and hope morning brings,
All get freshness with whole things.

How to wish you God I do not know,
We are following path as you show.
We adore you offering flowers ever
Those are also your creations favour.

Flavour of life flows while you boon,
We all souls awake in memory soon.
Moon hides and sun shines with light,
We expect the day fills us with bright.

Right choice comes in mind with kind,
Pure things bring values those do bind.
Blind man too feels reflections of rays,
Bows before you to urge right he says.

Oh merciful father your love is eternal,
We know this secret from our internal.
All material relationships are perishable,
You are permanent you do make us able.

You wish us saying ever children sweet,
In same manner we wish and do meet.
Oh father good morning, as you say ever,
We follow your decree God, forget never.

Tuesday, October 7, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: Spirituality
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A soul at morning awakes and says, "With new hope flower blossoms. Up to top of tower it spreads fragrances. Morning brings new hope and smile. At this time with whole things all get freshness. I do not know oh God how to wish you. You only show us path. As you are showing path likewise we are following. Ever we worship you offering flowers. Those flowers favour us and those are also your creations. While you boon us flavour of life flows properly. By getting your boon we all souls awake soon in memory. While morning comes moon hides and sun shines with light. Day fills us with bright qualities which we expect. With kind right choice comes in mind. Pure things at this morning bring values within us and values bind us in purity. Even a blind man feels the reflections of rays at this morning only. He bows before you to urge his right as he says. Your love is eternal oh merciful father. From our internal cores we know this secret. Here all material relationships are perishable. But you are permanent and eternal. You always make us able to feel, judge and know the right. Saying ever sweet children you always wish us. In the same manner we too wish you and meet each other. Oh father Good morning to you. As you say ever we too say you likewise. We follow your all laws and do never forget at all." This poem is based on such theme. This is written in Odisha, India and dedicated to the people of the world.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geetha Jayakumar 17 October 2014

A Beautiful dedication to Almighty God. Very cool and pleasant prayer especially at morning sun rise, which will fill our day with positivity. Loved reading each lines. You have presented it so well...Thanks for sharing it.

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Dinesan Madathil 07 October 2014

Scintillating erudition and expressive authenticity are, as judged from this write, the hall marks of your poetry madam Mahakul. Vast experience in life has enabled you to come out with this beautiful observation on life.

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Neela Nath Das 08 October 2014

A fabulous poem on morning, the best part of a day.

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Ramesh Rai 09 October 2014

Indeed an excellent and soulful write. Enjoyed the reading. Thank you so much for sharing. Regards.

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Noreen Carden 09 October 2014

Very sweet and beautiful poem well done

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Dr Dillip K Swain 28 April 2023

Blind man too feels reflections of rays/Bows before you to urge right he says....I totally agree with you dear madam, A fabulous poem. Top score and to my favourites!

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Akhtar Jawad 19 May 2018

How to wish you God I do not know, We are following path as you show. We adore you offering flowers ever Beautiful! Those are also your creations favour.

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Dr Antony Theodore 29 April 2017

Oh merciful father your love is eternal, We know this secret from our internal. All material relationships are perishable, You are permanent - Beautiful spiritual poem born of experience of life. loved this poem very very much dear poetess. tony

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Clarence Prince 21 April 2015

A nice God-fearing piece of Godly work, FATHER good Morning! Well done, Bhargabi!

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Walterrean Salley 03 November 2014

Oh merciful father your love is eternal, We know this secret from our internal. All material relationships are perishable, You are permanent you do make us able. This praise is so beautiful beyond words. Beautiful. Thank you.

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Bhargabi Dei Mahakul

Nuadihi, Khuntagaon, Bonai, Dist-Sundargarh, Odisha, INDIA
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