You are unseen but also captured
In minds of many you are featured,
You divert the child well nurtured,
On grazing by you animals are pastured.
Watching the innocent baby new born
You wait and hide to catch with turn,
While child grows little you blow horn
He starts telling things are my in morn.
You are just like colour changing lizard,
You fill in man really negative wizard.
In minds of many you do bring blizzard,
Fishes and birds enter food to gizzard.
By getting you animals loose a steer,
Birds fly with tending to fall with fear,
They fall in confusion who live in sheer,
You motivate for crime and sticks smear.
You do spoil life oh go away oh greed
People fight for hand of land, and seed.
Please do not stay for negative breed,
People are with God now and in creed.
Greed sneaks in to ruin more lives. Your meaning is clear and beautiful. Wonderfully written my friend!
Go away greed. Greed must not be allowed to sustain. A beautiful well crafted nicely penned poem. Thanks for sharing.
4) From that point of view, PH is a true difficult poem site for many newcomers. I am glad that belongs to my past now and I regard Poem Hunter Poem Site as my own poetry home now. I do hope you'll read these responses of me. Thank you so much for all your precious comments on my poems, dear Mrs. Bhargabi. I do hope you are getting fine and healthy and that you enjoy the days with your grandkids.
3) Powerful theme and most beautifully worded, Mrs. Bhargabi. God's Blessings in Abundance for you and your beloved family. A full 10++++++ for this fantastic poem. I must confide to you that although my poems are here since 2011, I did not know yet how to give responses here on Poem Hunter. Through much help from your spouse and eldest son, finally I could find my way here on Poem Hunter.That was in 2017-2018.
2) Reading this fascinating poem once again, I realize how powerful words it contains, and with excellent end rhymings. This is a very society engaged poem. You take the worst element in society just like that. Straight and direct. My hats off for you. Absolutely Greed is the worst enemy in human life. It births only negativity. Indeed it must not stay. I am sure with our prayings and God's help in our daily blessings, greed has no foot to stay anymore.
Could you forgive me, dear Mrs. Bhargabi Dei Mahakul? For being far too late to congratulate you with being the Member Poem Of The Day last 26 Jan 2015. Even when I responded here last 3 May 2017, I did not know that your powerful poem GO AWAY GREED was chosen by Poem Hunter an Team as The Member Poem Of The Day. Now I say to you CONGRATULATIONS, Mrs. Bhargabi. I have deep respect for the way you created this poem. It has become a magnificent and very impressing poem. (2)
You are just like colour changing lizard, You fill in man really negative wizard. In minds of many you do bring blizzard, Fish and birds enter food to gizzard.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I like this line You divert the child well nurtured. A truthful take on greed.