First Love

Rating: 3.3

First love begun...
Illuminating,
Waiting,
Like its always been there.

First love ended...
Illusive,
Evasive,
Like its never been here.

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Jerry Hughes 02 September 2005

Pene, like the seasons it will return...

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Herman George Sequira 04 August 2005

Tremendous feeling in this poem Pene. It's effectiveness is in its brevity. The first stanza...happiness, the second...a sense of loss. Nice work.

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