First-Love Failure Poem by Eddi Hong

First-Love Failure

Rating: 2.0


I see your tears
in the rain
I see your fear
in a big cage

I saw you smile
it may be a lie
to hide your pain behind your smile

I know
I understand
the sorrow
But you have big strength
in you, more than you know

You'd done well
to get his love
You'd fought hard
to defend your love

It's normal
for the first love
comes and ends in wrong path
no one's fault

it may be tough
when he didn't choose to stay
it may be hard
for you to let him go away

The pain you felt
wasn't really the edge
The heartache you have
isn't the one that make you change

It is your strength
that make you strong
through the tough
and the wrong
of drama's strange

Time may heal
but it also could kill
The better way is to accept it

Sounds complicated
but no need to be frustrated
over your lost
and your efforts

Change your impression,
improve your sensation
Turn their perception,
over your frustration

You're beauty in many ways
Hope you have wonderful days

Thursday, March 30, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: first love,lifespan,love,love and life,poems,poets
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
For my friend that having complicated love story, cheer up
I'm sorry if this is a bad poem for you and the readers
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Resh Kav 19 June 2017

this is not bad poem. This is the reality of life

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Jazib Kamalvi 02 April 2017

Reality is reality. Sometime sweet, sometime bitter. This time good, that time bad. Thankr for sincere caption.

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Eddi Hong

Tanjung Balai, North Sumatera, Indonesia
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