First Night Poem by Joanna Pavlides

First Night

Rating: 5.0


So naked I stood in front of you
Full of hope and full of fear

Locked in your arms I slept that night
Loneliness was no longer real

Your breath carressed strands of my hair
Your palms touched my hungry skin

It was an evening of hurting hearts
That life has put together to heal.

Thursday, August 6, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sekharan Pookkat 14 August 2015

nice narration and word choice

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Kim Barney 06 August 2015

Very nice, except that the very last word should be HEAL instead of HEEL.

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