First Rain Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

First Rain

Rating: 5.0


The smell
Of thirsting loam
Soaks in when free to roam
For a short time in all its spell,
First rain!
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Cinquains | 25.11.08 |

Tuesday, September 4, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: rain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 23 November 2019

Thirsting loam! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aniruddha Pathak 24 November 2019

Yes, the dry soil when thirsts for rain... thanks for visiting

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 September 2018

First rain while falls with many drops on ground soil soaks these raindrops and a nice smell from soil comes out. Your perception towards natural happening is really very nice and excellent. A brilliant poem is beautifully penned..10

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Aniruddha Pathak 24 November 2019

Such lovely feedback and missed it, my apologies dear KM missing this out, but thanks so much, belated though.

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Godhra - Gujarat
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