The smell
Of thirsting loam
Soaks in when free to roam
For a short time in all its spell,
First rain!
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Cinquains | 25.11.08 |
First rain while falls with many drops on ground soil soaks these raindrops and a nice smell from soil comes out. Your perception towards natural happening is really very nice and excellent. A brilliant poem is beautifully penned..10
Such lovely feedback and missed it, my apologies dear KM missing this out, but thanks so much, belated though.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Thirsting loam! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Yes, the dry soil when thirsts for rain... thanks for visiting