First Step Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

First Step

Rating: 5.0


First step
I took to bend,
To walk across to mend,
But to my smile her smirk was slap,
Last step!
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Cinquains | 26.11.08 |

Tuesday, September 4, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: despair,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 05 September 2018

First step taken to walk with love matters a lot. Before any task we shall be cautious and decide well to take first step so that we can lead and get success. A brilliant poem is excellently penned...10

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Bernard F. Asuncion 04 September 2018

Such a well crafted cinquain, Aniruddha.........10++++++++++++++++++++

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Aniruddha Pathak

Aniruddha Pathak

Godhra - Gujarat
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