Flame On Waters Poem by Luningning Minguez

Flame On Waters



What sense that she is present?
These are grasses that she has grieve at
There they’ve gone and smart they stood
Has Emerald drunk those flowing rivers that came from her swollen lids?

‘Aaaah! ”
Does she worth that Emerald has brought
her rainbows after gloomy skies?
That she was bathe over smoky fragrance
Of flower petals and crystal waters?
That she was wrapped by seemingly endless
warmth of his soulful skin?

Over moons…she sailed and sailed
Over the depth and beauty of Pacific Seas…
She went drowning and has not cease it’s angry waves…
Does she worth that Emerald dreamt and laid down the Earth?
Soon she’ll see how empty the seas could be! ! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ency Bearis 10 June 2009

nice introspective write...well expressed........10

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Joseph Poewhit 27 June 2009

Like being in a life raft upon the ocean

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Antonio Liao 26 June 2009

the last line....leads me to see beyond time...a wonderful emotion, capture the immortality of tomorrow....a beautiful aura of the horizon of hope. a pedestal of conquering the wisdom of the spirit of today... leave no mark of wonder, its reality you stay my dear....I love the way you ink...the poem a 10 +++++

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Raj Nandy 26 June 2009

A well written poem! Keep writing! - Raj Nandy

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Aziz Alkaabi 24 June 2009

Very creative images you throw in this poem, Luningning, And good choice of words blended with some deep feelings so vivid in every line, I wish you the best in your education and in advancing your creative work. Aziz

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Marieta Maglas 10 June 2009

you put so much feelings all through.. we can feel your poem breathing and sighing..nicely penned too..10.+

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