Flinging Singing Shaking Poem by Lacie Wasserman

Flinging Singing Shaking

Rating: 4.0


Words flinging. Hands singing. Bodies shaking.
It was all in the making.
You try to fight for your right to speak your mind.
Only to be interrupted in the beginning and find he doesn't care.
All the things you want to share are immediately shushed by his flinging words.
You start to argue and the fighting begins.
Your hands start singing heavily as things unhinge. Bodies shaking with frustration.
You both are beginning to show your demonstration.
All the rising tension. Things go wild.
This is more than mild. You smile.
Words flinging. Hands singing. Bodies shaking.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deborah Cromer 04 July 2009

I imagine you. You are standing there. Your mouth closed, your hands silent and your body still. Just giving the 'look' and walking away. Having all the control and power you need. You do have rights, you need not be interupted, nor be shushed. But, there is a smile involved in your poem, so maybe it's okay? :) Lots to imagine in this poem. Could be just a big debate... I would hate for you not to be heard, if you had something to say. DC

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