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Floating On Cold Water

Rating: 4.8

No vanity fair magazine
to float on cold water
and arc further out
with sea moss and iodine kelp
and the run of slapping waves
then wash up sandy in ensenada

Near a cracked up automobile
breaking through a house rusted by sea life
insects ornery and electric

hang in the air
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Susan Bagley 05 December 2006

Very nice. I especially like 'tiny blue flowers willing themselves up through cracks like carpet' If you like my 'Desire' poem, you will like the 'Need' and 'Your Kiss' poem also. thanks for compliments and I like your writing also. :) Susan

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