Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 413,157 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Flock Around - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Flock around

It is human nature
To make sure
That you have something to show
With pride moments and go

It assumes great importance
When you become rich by chance
Or inherit in succession
It ignites your compassion

You are eager to show it in open
With pomp and show even
You try to move with influential people
And show as if it came with great struggle

People may flock around
To gain the ground
With sweet words
To find favor with work

So it can be termed as human weakness
To show happiness
By showing wealth in abundance
Strong enough to show it in everybody’s presence

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/22/2015 8:46:00 PM)


    That's a very insightful poem, expressed beautifully. Thank you for sharing it with me, Hasmukh jee.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/22/2015 8:46:00 PM)


    Obsidian Moon
    xYeah very good hasmukh
    22 Sep by Obsidian Moon | Reply
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/22/2015 8:45:00 PM)


    yeah, nothing is important than happiness.
    22 Sep by Ayenyein oo | Reply
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/22/2015 8:44:00 PM)


    Very true, our ego always wants to boast. A very thoughtful verse. Thank you.
    22 Sep
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/22/2015 8:44:00 PM)


    So it can be termed as human weakness
    To show happiness
    By showing wealth in abundance
    Strong enough to show it in everybody’s presence
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, September 22, 2015



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