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Flower In My Eye: 02

Rating: 5.0
On the soft petal of mind

This fragrance fills colours

A divine touch of emotions

The soul, the universe around

Full of lovely fragrance

Pouring out all,

Everythingshe owned.



The flower fills

The world around

With her fragrances

Inspires an urge

To walk along

The thorny path of life

Till the end of her days

Till all her petals drop.



She keeps on

Blooming with a smile

And sweet fragrances.


Like wise

I shall keep on loving,

Loving you,

Till the last breath

Till I sleep.
Saturday, November 4, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: flowers,love,love and friendship,sleep,sleeping
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COMMENTS
Paresh Chakra 29 November 2018
You are very romantic poet your poem is very romantic writing
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Paresh Chakra 25 November 2018
Flower in my eye is the nice poem 10++++++++++
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Paresh Chakra 24 November 2018
Like wise I shall keep on loving, Loving you, Till the last breath Till I sleep.i like this poem
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Paresh Chakra 23 November 2018
She keeps on Blooming with a smile And sweet fragrances. Nice line for this poem I like this line
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Riza Braholli 06 June 2018
you have my most sincere compliments for these passionate metaphysics that derive from our relationship of feelings with things. Thank you poet Ranjan Kumar Ghosh
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 12 January 2018
Dear Ranjan, Such a young mind writing a beautiful poem with such maturity. I really enjoyed the flower and its fragrance and the innocent love so pure.
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Ranjan Kumar Ghosh 16 January 2018
Thanks madam nice remark10+++++-
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Ranjan Kumar Ghosh 16 January 2018
Thanks madam nice remark I am very happy10++++++
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Valsa George 08 January 2018
A very romantic write with naive love overflowing! Beautiful! A 10
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Ranjan Kumar Ghosh 09 January 2018
Thanks poet very beautiful comment10+++++++
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Susan Williams 07 January 2018
Such beauty- -how I yearn for more new poems to read from you. :)
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Ranjan Kumar Ghosh 07 January 2018
Thanks madam so nice cimment10+++++
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Bri Edwards 05 January 2018
Everythingshe owned.........you or (perhaps) PH has left a space out between 'g' and 's'. Like wise..........i think you 'want' Likewise here (no space) . :) i don't use or 'care much' for symbolism. On the soft petal of mind...........mind or mine? ? ? i don't know. i wonder if your sleep refers to actual sleeping (like in a bed) or death (as in a coffin) . bri :)
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Ranjan Kumar Ghosh 05 January 2018
Thanks Sir very beautiful comment10++++
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Susan Williams 23 December 2017
Stunningly visuals intertwined with wisdom- -a hallmark of your poetry to this date. A grateful 10++ for your kind heart and lovely poem! ! ! !
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Ranjan Kumar Ghosh 04 January 2018
Thanks madam nice remark so nice
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