Flying To The Success Poem by aung si myanmar

Flying To The Success

Rating: 2.5


To fly to the success
How many wings should we have?
The wind, a great fortune.
No...
The wind, trying hard.
Not yet...
The wind, being wise.
Not right...
The wind, the desire that is strong.
Totally wrong...
So we need all of these.
Not complete...

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The only wind we need is
Being ready for every case.
Hence, my message is that
Getting ready for everything is
Flying to the real success.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tiger Lily Love 07 October 2012

I really enjoyed this poem! The ending lines were fantastics! Keep it up!

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Elizabeth Padillo Olesen 02 October 2012

With a nice twist at the end which makes ther reader not quite prepared but you succeed in putting up your thought. Keep on writing! .

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Eindaray Kyaw 08 August 2012

Your message, Getting ready for everything is Flying to the real success, is really trustworthy. Keep on trying!

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