To My Dear One Poem by aung si myanmar

To My Dear One

Rating: 5.0


She....., not my student.
But she's always submissive my words.
Whatever I force her,
Ow! she could follow like a master.
I bet nothing can stop her glorious future.

She....., not my teacher.
But I have to learn noble manners from her.
Whenever I glimpse her actions,
Ow! they're full of precious lessons.
I bet no word is worth to mention.

She....., not my girlfriend.
But her verses are straight to my heart.
Wherever I feel creations of her pen,
Ow! thrill comes to me with rhythm.
I bet no beauty can compare her poems.

She....., not my relative.
But we build up fantastic friendship.
Whoever asks me to stay away from her,
Ow! why do I part my lovely pick-up sister?
I bet our poetry will make us close forever.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is for my dear friend, Eindaray.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eindaray Kyaw 25 September 2012

WOW......so cool.! ! Firstly...I thank you very much! ! I feel like the cloud floating in the air while I read your poem.. Some of the verses can make me laugh and amuse! Thank you, bro! !

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Sunny Rose 26 September 2012

Sweet is the word for this poem m really glad 4 u two

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So Close 26 September 2012

really fantastic....i like your friendship very much..superb! ! good work aung si »so close«

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Poetheart Morgan 03 October 2012

how much gentleness, kindness. Gorgeous! !

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Young Church Poetry 15 October 2012

Beautiful poem, very brilliant. Love it so much.

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Yash Shinde 14 October 2012

beautiful, touching good to describe your fiend, fragrant words brilliant thought

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Unwritten Soul 07 October 2012

Aww this is very nice, a beautiful tribute for your dearest friend, this is comfy inked paper for your both of you exchange the sweet words together, remember friends is more than diamond, even the sky fall you will stay tall together_Soul

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 07 October 2012

Well penning here..so great and honest. i agree with your fragrant words about Eindaray. Two brilliant minds. Good work man.

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Anita Sehgal 06 October 2012

well put...great read!

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