Font Color=darkvioletunfinished P… Poem by Jane Meyer

Font Color=darkvioletunfinished P…



I seem to just start things…
I leave them trailing like…
never quiet get things…
end thing with…
My thoughts aren’t ever…
I must have gone…
words start flowing then…
I wish that just once I could…
All my life I’ve been…
no one could understand that…
It’s time for me to…
If only…

(I think that this is pretty much a nonsense poem, considering that it makes no sense: D. But I’ll give my endings to these, just so you know what I was thinking.
[Title]-oem
line 1-then they fade away
2-an unfortunate balloon caught by the wind,
3-finished,
4-so, but, and, or.
5-complete
6-insane, completely mad,
7-they suddenly stop.
8-speak my mind, stand up for myself, say everything I need to.
9-running away from decisions,
10-I don’t want to make a choice.
11-pick a path.
12-I knew how to end this poem: D.
So now I have two halves of nonsense that hopefully make a little more sense. If you have to time I’d love how you’d end the lines in a comment, even if you can only do one line, I’d love to read it! Thanks for reading!)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
HaZeM PaKKaR 28 June 2010

lol.. this is a funny & witty poem.. it looks like a game.. it took me 5 days to put halves together.. eventually, I got this: I seem to just start things... always hard to finish. I leave them trailing like... adrift kites in the sky. never quiet get things... together. end thing with... a sigh or a swear. My thoughts aren’t ever... clear & pure. I must have gone... Insane, completely mad (couldn't find something better, lol) words start flowing then, ... I got choked. I wish that just once I could... have my own yacht, catch a fish, throw it back to the sea. All my life I’ve been... listening to whispers of stars. no one could understand that... I don't want to get married. It’s time for me to... drink my NESCAFE. If only... I know where my mug is : D yes, yes.. I did it, I did it! !

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