Fools Prison Poem by Viola Grey

Fools Prison

Rating: 4.5


Tapping on the cold mirror
of my soulless window,
you call me into the night.
Willingly, stupidly, I follow-
you pied piper of dreams,
you weaver of golden threads.
Not until I'm locked in the tower
of your bitterness prison
do I finally see
what love can do to fools.

16/11/08

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kris Smith 16 November 2008

That was a stunning write my friend top 10 Chris

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Tokyo hotel 16 November 2008

I've read your work it's great I look forward to reading more of your work. Tokyo

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Stephen Stirk 02 April 2009

Poetic mastery.a portrayal of emotion into eloquence. Steve

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*Trusting You* 23 November 2008

Tapping on the cold mirror of my soulless window, you call me into the night. Willingly, stupidly, I follow- I love those lines great job. we all do things we know we shouldnt be we do anyway. Crystal

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Shimon Weinroth 19 November 2008

tread carefully, emotions often lead us astray, take heart there are and will be moments delicious and sweet, I am glad you use your poetry as an aphrodasiac, bittersweet,10

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Saint Cynosure 16 November 2008

Love both makes fools and breaks fools...10+

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Tom Balch 16 November 2008

The heart has no common sense, love the 'soulless window' 10 from Tom

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