Foolsday Sunset Poem by Richard George

Foolsday Sunset

Rating: 4.5


Spring has menarched.
The lads next door share a four-pack.

'Did you get off with her?
Give her a score out of ten'.

I want to clamour

'Did you gaze upon the ovarian?
Handle her memory
like bombs or blossoms! '

A fence divides us;

and an anorexic new moon
stained vermillion

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Max Reif 11 July 2005

These are some very strong images. 'Spring has menarched, ' for one, amazes me! I'm intrigued by your poetry, this and also the other one you just posted make me want to read more.

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Richard George

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Cheltenham, U.K.
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