Footprints Poem by ROOP REKHA BHASKAR

Footprints

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Every time I gazed, my footprints washed away,
Any sign of showing, I left it, unmistakably there.
Finally I decided to prod and press with all my might,
The white silvery sand; so to leave an impression;
But what I saw I perceived, was a heartfelt lesson.

Every time I waited, for the sea to kiss my feet.
Each time she abandoned bubbles of foam sheet.
Ceaselessly waves disappeared; and relentless they surfaced.
Tireless I stood, while the waves repeated this sea dance,
I watched how she swallowed my marks,
Beneath the gigantic expanse.

The next wave waltzed, bobbing frothy sprays to greet;
With it fetched, a five spiked star fish, at my feet.
Alas! She just lay heedless, oblivious at her fate,
Seeming quite dead, until – a new tide danced in.
Surely she would lie to die - but was surprised to foresee,
That she let herself be absorbed, back into the sea.

Don’t stand stagnant at follies done and bygone.
Every day like every tide, steers in new beginnings.
Reflect on the wise star fish, calmly anticipating?
Another break another chance, always come your way.

Life has teachings plenty. We hold some, we shed some.
Mistakes are but human. No Winners without failures.
Sometimes ever fading, sometimes forever shine;
Because some of life’s moments are
Like footprints - on the sands of time

Wednesday, October 14, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: mistake
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I make many mistakes. Mistakes sometimes takes away a lot from us. And sometimes we ponder too long and hard on them. As i was walking on the seashore, the sea taught me something... Just like the waves that sweeps and remove all traces of my footsteps, no matter how hard i try to place them there, like wise i should not stand stagnated by my failures. The star fish too did not seem to struggle. it just waited for the waves to put it back into the sea. Life continues to give us options and choices. Better to grab when you have the time and not let it pass through your fingers.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 25 January 2016

Life is a teacher! And, we have to respect the laws. Thanks for sharing.

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Dr Antony Theodore 27 October 2015

I enjoyed this poem From the first verse onwards to the end. Thank you Roopa. Every time I waited, for the sea to kiss my feet. Each time she abandoned bubbles of foam sheet. Don’t stand stagnant at follies done and bygone. Every day like every tide, steers in new beginnings. Another break another chance, always come your way. wonderful reflection on the foot prints Roop and at the end a great philosophy of life. i get encouraged. after reading your poem, i want to go on come what may forgetting the past and to the future i stride on. thank you. tony

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 22 October 2015

Your poem reminded me of an old black and white Malayalam classic movie in which the hero sings to the heroine: On the glittering sands spread for drying by the winds, you did write a poem with your foot-prints And when I rushed to see what you wrote, a big wave came and erased it from my sight.. I am on the seashore with your poem. And where are you, Roop? A fellow-poet's anguish against a merciless sea of time and change.

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Valsa George 14 October 2015

I enjoyed the poem from start to finish! Such easy and spontaneous flow of words and thoughts like the advancing and receding waves of the ocean! I could visualize the entire scene! But never anticipated that the spiked star fish would become a medium to unfold such a lofty message. Yes, waves of adversities will beat against the shore of life, but believe that another wave of chance comes in the wake. Falling is natural.......Failure is not falling down, but staying down! How effectively you have brought out this salient truth! Roopa, you are not in a hurry to fill your page with poems, but once you write, you WRITE! !

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 October 2015

Life has teachings plenty. We hold some, we shed some. Mistakes are but human. No Winners without failures. Sometimes ever fading, sometimes forever shine; Because some of life’s moments are Like footprints - on the sands of time.........deeply and truely envisioned. An intensive poem so nicely depicted and wisely presented. I like this poem very much......10

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