For A Soul Mate Poem by elvashira silvertongue

For A Soul Mate

Rating: 5.0


Your beauty ensnares me
Not so much physically but soulfully
Your mind captivates me
Such a precious gift you are to me
Your soul calls to be set free
Your darkness don't hide from me
There's much beauty to be found in the night
Set it free! Set it free!

This i say to you and know it is true
Your pain becomes my pain
Searing deeply in these vains
Your agony becomes my agony
You scream for me to let you be
Your peace becomes my peace
I will never allow the fire in your eyes to cease

You are my darkness i am your light
Let us spread our broken wings and on our dreams take flight
Soul to soul heart to heart
I shall never allow us to fully be apart
I will help you the best i can in this fight we call life

Because for you my soul mate i'd give up anything and everything to see you safe smiling happy and finally alright.

Friday, July 17, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 04 August 2015

This poem drew comments from two people I know very well - Roseann Shawiak (one of my longest contacts here at PH) and Fabrizio Frosini (we have co-edited six e-books together and I've written extensive commentaries on all of his poems - I'm Fabrizio's personal LITERARY CRITIC!) . // There is effortless sincerity in this poem, which is bottom-line requirement in dealing with a soul-mate (You know the joke: An agent tells a rising rock star that SINCERITY is the most important quality he needs - If you can fake SINCERITY, man, you've got it made. Sic.) The concept of SOULMATES is similar to ROMANTIC LOVE: It's so hard to make those two experiences happen - they both involve precise timing, a stroke of good luck, the hand of Fate, courage, trust, risk-taking. But your poem leaves all of these prosaic things behind and just soars, and the SOUL-MATES fly together, effortlessly. As Roseann says, it's unconditional love being shared! !

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Roseann Shawiak 21 July 2015

Inspiring and heartfelt passion through an unconditional love being shared. Giving and taking, helping another through the darkness and turmoil of life, sparing nothing in this endeavor. Such a beautiful picture of soul mates, I truly enjoyed reading this poem. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Rachel Butler 18 July 2015

I enjoyed the tale the passion. The love under love for love. Well told

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Rachel Butler 18 July 2015

I am enjoying your expression of love and passion. Well told.

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Fabrizio Frosini 17 July 2015

an excellent description of love

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