Unknowingly, I approach you
not knowing what you are doing
gazing intently
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As Gina said, a truly tender love poem....for real! Such depth of yearning and love!
a superb piece of writing, donall...... subtle, beautiful and heart-warming....rachael
This is really such a lovely gentle poem...so well observed. For real! ginaXXX
It's beautiful I love it. So much said in so few words. You are really good at writing and I can really relate to this poem. Yours always Frankie x