Monday, July 23, 2007

For Real Comments

Rating: 5.0

Unknowingly, I approach you
not knowing what you are doing

gazing intently
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Dónall Dempsey
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Frankie Stones 24 August 2007

It's beautiful I love it. So much said in so few words. You are really good at writing and I can really relate to this poem. Yours always Frankie x

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Scarlett Treat 02 August 2007

As Gina said, a truly tender love poem....for real! Such depth of yearning and love!

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rachael richmond 26 July 2007

a superb piece of writing, donall...... subtle, beautiful and heart-warming....rachael

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Gina Pisapia 24 July 2007

This is really such a lovely gentle poem...so well observed. For real! ginaXXX

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Dónall Dempsey

Dónall Dempsey

Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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