For Simple Reaction Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

For Simple Reaction

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"Old habits die hard"
Good to remember as for word
One can't forgo with one stroke
Then habits shall not go I smoke

As dog's tail
Will always fail
Even if buried underground
Bent shall remain to be found

Greed shall always remain
Even if drive is maintained
Promises are taken
Soon to be forgotten

Human nature
Shall claim an error
But fail to see in mirror
Actual reflection shall frighten for ever

Who shall then to learn?
And turn
In right direction
For simple reaction

Wednesday, November 26, 2014
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Loyd C Taylor Sr 26 November 2014

Hello poet Hasmukh, you have accurately described on aspect of habits, well done, I enjoyed, Loyd

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Gangadharan Nair Pulingat 26 November 2014

Err is human so says the wise. Here the poet gives the facts of human habits where it reiterates the age old saying that promises are forgotten even it is a promise. The nature of human being is the same. likes the poem.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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