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Rating: 5.0

We're only just beginning,
and that's the hardest part,
so careful not to end it,
before we really start!
Discovering how to make you smile,
and subjects to avoid,
i listen as you take me back,
to times that you've enjoyed.
We've shared so little time so far,
but what we've hads been good,

i've felt more for you these past two weeks,
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Red Blooded Black Hearted 04 December 2007

10/10 from me. This poem is beautiful! Just starting off is the hardest part... especially if you didn't know that person for awhile. Sorry it took me so long to comment... I've not been in using distance of a computer lol. I hope this person is Mr Right for you. Keep writing Rissa: -)

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Ben Gieske 21 November 2007

Beginnings can be joyful and promising, but, as you say in the end, they can also be disappointing. Lots of feeling in your poem.

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Elle Thomas 13 November 2007

i think it was really nice, however personally i think that the end part about never meeting wasnt necessary. it was such a sweet poem, if only it didnt have to end.

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Red Blooded Black Hearted 05 November 2007

That's beautiful. I've had that feeling before too.l Great writing.

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yeah, sometimes i feel that way too

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(red) harley (blue) suici 01 November 2007

nice poem kaila keep on writing

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