For Us To Solve Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

For Us To Solve

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If we disregard to feel sorry
Unnecessary arguments may add to worries
Leave it to your own judgment
You may have happy moments

Why to weigh in pro and cons?
When truth is one and remains
Some may find it worthwhile
For others it may prove futile

History never repeat
So are beliefs to forget
If they are worth to remember
Practice it as honest and sincere

“Thirteen” number may be considered unlucky
But all beliefs are for us and very much tricky
If something goes wrong, we curse the choice
There is doubt from the beginning with promise

Believe in hard word or good efforts
After what takes ship at the port?
The favorable wind and resolve
Rest is the history for us to solve

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 October 2013

Scott Ransopher likes this. Scott Ransopher Another good poem Hasmukh! about a minute ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 October 2013

It's ok, but... Enid Ann19 minutes ago If you're going to have punctuation, you should have it throughout the whole poem, not just 2 question marks. Comment 1 Comment+1 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago Enid i do not use it all. it was objected by one of the site. so i go without it.. many poems i did.. how do u feel with poem s? welcome

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 October 2013

If we disregard to feel sorry Unnecessary arguments may add to worries Leave it to your own judgment

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 October 2013

luv sEan NoRtHLess than a minute ago it Comment +1 Good.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 October 2013

Sarah RamosLess than a minute ago Nice.

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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