Forever Poem by Alicia McNamaraCroft

Forever

Rating: 3.4


Love me for me or Leave me
But if you leave me I'm gone forever

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shekhar Joshi 17 December 2009

Nice and simple...straight to the point Liked it..... U \m/

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Kesav Easwaran 12 December 2009

love feelings nicely brought out...frank and honest good couplet...10

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Omar Ibrahim 24 November 2009

it's telling something; that you will be gone if he didn't love you for you only in two lines like two demonstrative sentences...and this is completely contradicted with the concept of a poem...but it is good as a verse...i liked it so keep writing..

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Joseph Poewhit 13 November 2009

Puts things in perspective well.

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Alicia McNamaraCroft

Alicia McNamaraCroft

Camden New, Jersey
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