He Makes Me Love Poem by Alicia McNamaraCroft
He Makes Me Love
he makes me smile when times r down he makes me laugh even when he doesnt try i love his smile his eyes his love for me i lvoe the way he cares about me i lvoe how he can cheer me up when all i do is say wat i love the way he talks to me it makes me feel all bubbly i lvoe the way he says goodnight like he never wants to sleep tonight i love the way he says i love you and smiles when i say i miss you i love the way he looks at my picture knowing that soon ill come out the picture but most of all i love the way i can tell him everything and he still loves me
it's wonderful but it will be much better if you arranged the lines in stanzas....but it stills a good piece...fine work i give it 9 unless it be in stanzas...keep writing cuz you're talented..
great job young one..love is so powerful.its a small word but a big emotion..its so passionate desirable....its good
love can be like a wave in the ocean, it will start off small and then gather strength as it gets closer to the shore, and that love will live forever more.
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4/24/2024 4:44:09 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Aww, this makes me wanna cry. Kinda weird to hear a guy say that huh? It's just so beautiful. I know how it feels, and it's so amazing. I felt exactly like that for a girl, well, I still do. But I lost her. I would never wish anything like that on you. I hope you guys have an awesome relationship, and I hope you always have each other.