Rachel BaByBeAr Anderson

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Forever Hurting - Poem by Rachel BaByBeAr Anderson

trudging through these lonely paths
he's got no-one to be a companion
who can help him stiffle this pain
he only ever wanted her
but he's hurt her too much for her to turn around
and now shes found someone else
jelousy brings tears
Mask slipping now and again
and tripping over his own darkness
only those close enough can see the fire
that burns his mind
he'll only ever want her
and now she's gone
he'll be forever burning
like a star, lonely and on fire
and like a star he believes it will last forever


Comments about Forever Hurting by Rachel BaByBeAr Anderson

  • Romeo Della Valle (12/27/2009 12:21:00 PM)


    Wow, Rachel, this poem really touched my heart, it brought tears to my eyes, very deep, since it reminds me of the woman behind my poems...(A QUEEN WAS BORN'//well penned...very sad indeed...10+++keep it up, I must continues in 'A JOURNEY'...Happy New Year! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, December 27, 2009

Poem Edited: Sunday, December 27, 2009


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