Monday, February 2, 2009

Forever I'Ll Stay (C) 2-2-09 Comments

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In the beginning we shared our love but then that went to a pause
But I'm sticking here with you though you've went through it all
I claim you as my lover but the spark isn't mutual
I wish we could love each other and laugh like usual
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Zahir Kijani
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Rachel Anderson 21 March 2010

Very good ryhming, i like how you are allowing people to take it and use it for their loved ones. great work :)

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Zahir Kijani

Zahir Kijani

Buffalo, New york
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