Forgiveness! Poem by Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

Forgiveness!

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I feel very sorry,
to make your hands to bleed,
When you shattered,
my heart with your fist,
The broken pieces,
accidentally punctured your skin,
With a weakened heart,
I regret for my action.

Saturday, December 8, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: forgiveness,sorry
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chandra Thiagarajan 12 December 2012

Oh! So lovely! Though your heart was shattered by the fist what a wonderful heart you have to feel for the blood!

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Savita Tyagi 09 December 2012

Like it. such poignant words and bold framing.

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