Fortune- Telling Poem by Rehan Hyder

Fortune- Telling



When I touch
Your hand
I feel
Suns of
your palm
would never
leave
my skies

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Viola Grey 21 September 2008

sometimes its the few words shared that say the most...how simply divine this is...may the universe send me someone who can speak like this...beautiful

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Karen Delta 26 May 2008

this actually brought tears to my eyes! ! Now thats love! kisses

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Indira Babbellapati 01 April 2008

mind boggling metaphor!

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Waqas Naeem 08 March 2008

I'm compelled by your writing to praise it... the more I read, the more I fall in love it...your verse is complex sometimes and its sweetly simple at others...there are so many shades to it...and here i see love dancing in new found bloom!

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