***********on August 21,2008 Poem by _____________________________________ -

***********on August 21,2008

Rating: 3.0

I shall wait
I shall let the vindictive
Fingers of time gnaw at
My innards ala Chinese torture

I shall wait
To watch you cross alone
threshold of door; we once crossed together

Do come as my patience
Breathes unsteadily on vent

Do come for my eyes
Are soggy and sore with dreams;
Dangling on eyelids

Come adorned as lei on your lover’s
Manhood; for insanity has replaced envy

Come on bier
If you wish to deny delivery of any
Happiness to the living me

Come so your senses have million orgasms
In watching mayhem and gore
That time and your absence
Have perpetrated second after second

Indira Babbellapati 19 August 2008

what connotation...it reads a familiar metaphor...

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Waqas Naeem 08 September 2008

a thrilling account...the desire takes a breath-taking avatar in the last stanza... and this one just stands out 'Come on bier If you wish to deny delivery of any Happiness to the living me' cheers

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Sathyanarayana M V S 05 September 2008

excellent piece. The last stanza is extraordinary....my 10

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Ershad Mazumder 02 September 2008

Very good.I enjoyed it.

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Dr.Wardha Jawdat 28 August 2008

hey! ! no no not at all! ! ! ! all is well...just a little hectic for last couple of weeks....very graphic and pressing on the senses due to boldness of verse.kudos!

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Irum . 21 August 2008

i appreciate you being so blunt in picturing your thoughts

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