Four Liner - Rubaiyat ~ Feelings Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Four Liner - Rubaiyat ~ Feelings

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We try to build a castle of dream on our weak flesh,
When body overrides the needs and wants.
We find ourselves hapless and selfish.
We feel betrayed and cheated by the body chemistry.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deepak S S 22 April 2021

Body is temporary and soul is permanent.

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Zoyza Da Vinka 21 April 2021

We find ourselves hapless and selfish. We feel betrayed and cheated by the body chemistry.

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me poet yeps poet 20 April 2021

we do we do 5 points to MAN YOU

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Rajan Trajan Renganathan 20 April 2021

We have limitations with this body, if we think too far to take it.

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