Four Liner - Rubaiyat - Sharing Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Four Liner - Rubaiyat - Sharing

Rating: 5.0


Is there a stairway to heaven?
If yes then surely it must be passing
Through the hearts of the poor people
Who have nothing to share yet stand with you

Wednesday, April 14, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: sharing,philosophical
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 14 April 2021

Wonderful four liner that evokes kindness. The poor must be afforded with assistance to alleviate their plight. Well written.

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Captain Cur 14 April 2021

A great write, those steps can bear the weight of all. I hear they are very wide steps, but no railings, so be careful not to stray!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 16 April 2021

Stairway to heaven passing through the hearts of poor people. Wonderful lines. Loved this Rubaiyat. Top stars

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 16 April 2021

Such wonderful thoughts weaved into a beautiful poem, dear, dear Poet Asim ji

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Suman J 15 April 2021

Wise words. Nice poetry.

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Zoyza Da Vinka 15 April 2021

Richness lies in sharing and caring not in boasting and ego.

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Kostas Lagos 14 April 2021

I would prefer an elevator! Brilliant poem!

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