Fragile Breath Poem by Amanda Swindahl

Fragile Breath

Rating: 3.5


Take a deep breath.
A breath to fragile to take, lost in the moment of our memories,
An amble pace my heart beats to the rythem you make me feel.
A dancing desire that releases all else but the love I feel.
A breath to fragile to take, a kiss that cant be described,
these feelings i cannot hide, your lips against mine, a connection i find.
A love to beautiful to end, becalmed and so alive,
I breath you, a breath to fragile to take,
Dont exhale.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Excellent imagework...Pristine construction(i like the single spaced-staza pattern) Crisp, & mellifluously smooth throughout..Eloquent & tastefully sensual...Solid Work, Amanda. ~ F.j.c.R. ~

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Excellent imagework...Pristine construction(i like the single spaced-staza pattern) Crisp, & mellifluously smooth throughout..Eloquent & tastefully sensual...Solid Work, Amanda. ~ F.j.c.R. ~

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