Fay Slimm

Rookie - 102 Points (Ageless. / in Cornwall U.K.)

Fragrance Of Love. - Poem by Fay Slimm

Loves dances it's way in my heart, smelling
Of roses, the sweetest strong old bushrose,
Which, inhaling, takes away breath, and tells
A musk-tale of hot summer nights, imposing
Indelible scents in my mind. - - - - Apart
We may be, and distanced more by the sea
But wafting aroma of love, barters
It's strongly perfumed rosyness to me
In exchange for my soul. Take it sweetheart,
I don't need to tell you it's yours, others
Have offered me make-believe love, but part
Company - - - when I never discover
The fragrance of roses among their words.
Should that emit from the core, love can occur.

Comments about Fragrance Of Love. by Fay Slimm

  • (4/5/2009 4:48:00 AM)

    Flowers expressed in a true love, form the perfume of bliss...how
    lovely is this poem...10++
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  • (4/5/2009 2:29:00 AM)

    Beautiful romantic write Fay...your words simply flow through to the end conclusion....wonderful....Fi 10++++ (Report) Reply

  • (4/5/2009 1:39:00 AM)

    magnificent piece, again.. you never cease to amaze. (Report) Reply

  • (4/5/2009 1:31:00 AM)

    awesome poem..very suggestive write...nice (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, April 5, 2009

Poem Edited: Sunday, April 5, 2009

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