Frank Message For All Young Ones Poem by me poet yeps poet

Frank Message For All Young Ones

Rating: 5.0


You all seemingly have some
unique creativity
about you
you go
go on for ever

all will know
who you are
for ever and ever

beware
this world is a dangerous place
trust no one
no disappointment
will ever you trace
live life with grace
at home the safest place
sweetest and securest place
though not always
dangerous scheming relatives

rouges abound
lovers rebound
and
then it becomes
a fall fromgrace
keep safe

A message I always give
to teens
but sad enough
they never
listen to me

till their fingers
they burn
then
there is no balm
with poet in me
except sympathy
now I am imparting empathy
must decipher the two
you ought to...

Wednesday, September 26, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: wake up call,warning,boy,boyfriend,creativity,friends,girls,messages,poetic expression
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Notes Times have changed minds have deranged none care for no body theyall only want somebody You must know it BE AWARE only This world is not a safe haven think of it as the only earthly heavenelsewhere there is NONE
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 28 September 2018

ill their fingers they burn then there is no balm with poet in me except sympathy now I am imparting empathy must decipher the two you ought to...........so touching with nice theme. A beautiful poem so nicely executed.10

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Naila Rais 27 September 2018

Yes! So meaningful............... Naila

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 27 September 2018

Thank you for your kind visits young poettree

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Bernard F. Asuncion 27 September 2018

Such an excellent poem.........10++++++++++++++++

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 26 September 2018

read as ROGUES in place of typo rouges similar spelling one is a rose another one only does dispose in a garbage bin

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