Tuesday, December 15, 2009

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Childhood sees between the cracks
Blocks of lies the adults plant
Distracting people from their deeds
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Eyan Desir 22 December 2009

Well written well express good job

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Nikunj Sharma 22 December 2009

truth of a child, like a layer of ashes between the two volcanic ages stays intact with time...only it changes hands. Life comes a full circle when we grow up and become adults....your poem is as sweet as you are

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Bonnie Harding 15 December 2009

straight and to the point nice job!

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Jerry Hughes 15 December 2009

Thoughtfully excellent Tess, well done. Cheers, Jerry

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