Freedom For Me Poem by ritty patnaik

Freedom For Me

Rating: 5.0


the death of me,
was only the beginning
of my freedom.
no one but me
understood it.

for now i am free
of the fetters of fate'
and i can merge into my soul,
which is me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bob Blackwell 28 July 2009

'The death of me was only the beginning of my freedom.' Letting go should be easy, after we find the witness to all things. Loved it, for it is the truth of all.

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Goran Gustafsson 20 June 2009

Nicely written about the importance to see the difference between the Ego/Persona and your true Self./gg

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Marieta Maglas 16 June 2009

a wonderful cognitive metaphor: '' the death of me, was only the beginning of my freedom.'' of a wonderful abstract poem.I appreciate this, because we need enough courage for finding freedom in this....10++

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Alice Anne Gordon 07 June 2009

I don't know why... but this made me smile with a knowing heart. Like the death card in tarot, re-birth and new awakenings are so powerful. I enjoyed reading this piece. Well done.

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