Fresh Breath Poem by Lamar Cole

Fresh Breath



He woke up in the morning wanting fresh breath and all.
He grabbed a bottle thinking it was Listerine.
But it turned out to be Pine-Sol.
He gargled and he did it well.

But his throat started to burn.
And his mouth had that Pine-Sol smell.
Even though his face kept getting bluer.
At least his breath didn't smell like a sewer.

Friday, October 19, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: people
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Rini Shibu 20 October 2018

Hope he didn’t use cockroach hit gel as tooth paste

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 October 2018

He woke up in the morning wanting fresh breath and all. He grabbed a bottle thinking it was Listerine. But it turned out to be Pine-Sol. He gargled and he did it well...........Nice poetic expression. Touching and impressive. Thanks for sharing.

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