Why not pray sun set?
Think of fresh energy to get
Relaxation over activities of hectic day
To think of sun rise very next day
Yes it is quest for good life
The question of faith for strife
It is strong resolve to face the challenge
Love to work hard and manage
As sun moves around globe
What scope is left for any probe?
It is time to relax and assess
Think over days gain and loss
It is recognition open fact
That needs reaction with positive act
Work for whole of the day
And relax when night offers dark sway
Go and surrender with peace of mind
The divine object has provided kind relief
It needs consolation for inner voice
Good attempt for bright future promise
pretty good kelly lisa dale2 hours ago i liked it Comment +1
Scott Ransopher Another good poem Hasmukh! 8 hrs · Unlike · 1
Hasmukh Mehta welcome elaine taub 2 secs · Unlike · 1
nice work! Poetry IsLife2 hours ago a few grammar errors, but good start!
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Why not pray sun set? Think of fresh energy to get