Friend Of Hundreds Poem by Afzal Shauq

Friend Of Hundreds

Rating: 5.0


The one...
looks at me
seems you...

The one...
sweetly smiles
seems you...

Always
the feeling
something missing...
The one...
You.

And I say...
This is you...
That is you...
Here is you...
There is you...

And in
this and that
I became
Friend of hundreds
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Poem In Pashto By: Afzal Shauq
Translated in English By: Alley Boling
Book: 'TWIST OF FATES' Poem No.157/Page.212
Web Link: http: //khyberwatch.com/nandara/index.php?
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Poet's weblog: www.tolafghan.com/members/afzalshauq
© Afzal Shauq

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Noha El3wdy 22 June 2009

: D search and search and search. liked this one most, you expressed your need of her'the one' in a unique way. you seek her and doing so you gain many friends, thats great.

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Noha El3wdy 24 June 2009

“Friend Of Hundreds”, search … search and search… only search is found in your rich poetry. That’s why you claim yourself as a friend of hundreds. How lucky one are you..? Wish if I am included in them too. This poem is pointing your fame in friends. Liked this one most, you expressed your need of hers who is making you mad in a unique way. The credit goes to her…because you seek her and she hides from you. Can I call you a Friend of hundreds Afzal, a great poet?

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Maria Barbara Korynt 04 October 2009

Seeking the friendship, most often our friendship will be given, appreciating others. Into the very way, we are gaining the most friends. it wonderfully, if we are able to see the friend in everyone, who understands what these feeling are indicating. It wonderfully, when we are able to give the example and evidence that it is valuable emotion. Everyone from us needs the friend, even one. Wonderfully, if is of them more. Very good poem.(10v.) Maria Barbara Korynt

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Brigid Guthrie 16 August 2009

The one... sweetly smiles seems you... Always the feeling something missing... The one... You. I loved this poem! Very expressive and well written. You show your true feelings and thoughts in this poem, you did a great job putting your thoughts into words. You were expressive in a unique way and i admire your poetry...10+

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Silent Speaker 15 August 2009

Amazingly different. a wonderful way to put thoughts into words.

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Marianne Ulm 12 August 2009

I really like this poem because you express your feelings in an unique way. It's kinda hard to explain it.10/10

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-->Friendly poem! ! ! to be a friend of hundreds is really a great done! ! ! you followed a political method to gather maximum of friends… however the main thing is not gathering friends but letting friends trust you… keep up! ! ! +10....

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