Friend Zone Poem by NiQ Ombaso

Friend Zone

Rating: 5.0


You don't get it, do you?
I mean more than just a friend
I want to be your man one who stays
We can make a great team
you and I
A power couple meant for greatness
How about that?
Let me out
Let me free
You rescued me I know I want out
To get in
Am suffocating with intentions
Good intentions
I wanna flirt with you
Get you blushing all over
Admire your blush
Your unending smile
Break me loose
I want to commit
Only to my besty
Who happened to be you
But am stuck
In your prison of friend zone
With bars of affection
Grills of kindness
And a wall care
Which makes everything confusing
Truly complicated
Let me out
To take you in

Thursday, August 9, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hannington Mumo 07 July 2019

Great piece...I really enjoyed reading this emotion-laden composition: -)

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Jazib Kamalvi 11 February 2019

A good start with a nice poem, Niq. Read my poem Love and L u s t. Thanks.

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Joylyne 09 August 2018

This piece....I do read over and over.....keep up...more pieces please

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Niq Ombaso 13 August 2018

Thank you joylyne for the feed back feels good to speak to someone through my poem

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Chinedu Dike 09 August 2018

Really an insightful piece of poetry nicely penned from the heart. Heartfelt with strong emotions. thanks for sharing NiQ.

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Niq Ombaso 13 August 2018

Thank you Chinedu i appreciate it alot

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Niq Ombaso 13 August 2018

Thank you Chinedu i appreciate

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