If a meager
friendly smiling gestures can
easily occupy
the hearts in control,
Then why
the need of fight
with guns
to subdue each others?
© Afzal Shauq
i guess a smile would cost a lot to them..that's why. But you did a very good work here..It's simply awesome. :)
In the few words, so a lot, a good poet can say. To the posed question, to which we should everyone to look for an answer, if we care about living in the peace and the friendship. Very good poem.(10v.) Maria Barbara Korynt
Then why the need of fight with guns to subdue each others? Very deep and touching, you are an amazing poet. keep writing! 10
very true! never thought of it that way short and to the point 10 :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
a beautiful loving poem..10+++++ a true call for all to smile.. .and yes the smile which ease the difficult ways, It release the hate in others' hearts ..that smile which take you the extra mile. the smile has a taste of the sweetest bie, it carries you so high in others eye.. it is the love's kingdom queen...it is wetting every dry. ..it shines other's face..it is the majic in the eyes.. .a gift from the skies that smile which painted on one's face and spring from a deep place..it is your sign..it leaves on one the beauty of your trace.. it is the stranger's password to a new place...come for a while take some smiles and distributed to other needy guys .....