Friendship Poem by DICKSON MSETI

Friendship

Rating: 2.8


CAN YOU BE MY FRIEND PLEASE,
AND MAKE MY MIND AT EASE,
FOR MY POEMS TO ADVERTISE,
TO GROW OURSELVES AS WISE,

OOH, WANNA KNOW MY NAME?
I DON'T FEEL SHY OR SHAME,
AS WE ARE THE SAME,
IN POEMS WE AWESOME,

FRIENDSHIP IS A HOME,
LIKE A STAR YOU BECOME,
I LIKE A FRIEND WITH ME,
TOGETHER WE WILL BE.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 24 April 2010

friendship is home.... i like this line. more and more perfect your english. write your emotions and thoughts. develop your own philosophy. a poet is one who has a unique message. i shall read more of ur poems. please read mine too. thank u

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Kolawole Ajao 23 April 2010

Dickson, together we will be friend. I naturally detest the act of voting creative effort and if not for that, I would vote this above the highest point in the calibration.

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Kolawole Ajao 23 April 2010

Dickson, together we will be friend. I naturally detest the act of voting creative effort and if not for that, I would vote this above the highest point in the calibration.

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Ivy Joy Finez 06 March 2010

10 for the nice poem.

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