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Forgive Us God - Poem by DICKSON MSETI

God is great,
When we achieve,
God is great,
When we succeed,
God is great,
When we’re accepted,
But oh!
We blame him,
When we loose,
When we fail,
It was our mistake,
We failed to behave,
We planned not plans.

Comments about Forgive Us God by DICKSON MSETI

  • (5/29/2010 4:32:00 AM)

    i understand where you are coming from. i was once like that so for you to write a poem people can relate to it good. i really enjoy this poem. the thing is GOD can only lead you in the right path, but its your choice weather you want to follow the path or go you only ways. (Report) Reply

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  • (5/3/2010 7:15:00 PM)

    we must learn to accept responsibility for our own actions.God gave us free will to choose. (Report) Reply

  • (4/23/2010 4:37:00 AM)

    The true picture of man's demeanour towards God painted. May He just forgive us. Nice. (Report) Reply

  • Abnish Singh Chauahan (4/23/2010 2:28:00 AM)

    This is the common human tendency. Your poetic talent captured the reality. Congrats. (Report) Reply

  • Prince Obed de la Cruz (4/16/2010 11:23:00 PM)

    i rated this 10... nice message... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, February 2, 2010

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