God is great,
When we achieve,
God is great,
When we succeed,
God is great,
When we’re accepted,
But oh!
We blame him,
When we loose,
When we fail,
It was our mistake,
We failed to behave,
We planned not plans.
we must learn to accept responsibility for our own actions.God gave us free will to choose.
The true picture of man's demeanour towards God painted. May He just forgive us. Nice.
This is the common human tendency. Your poetic talent captured the reality. Congrats.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
i understand where you are coming from. i was once like that so for you to write a poem people can relate to it good. i really enjoy this poem. the thing is GOD can only lead you in the right path, but its your choice weather you want to follow the path or go you only ways.